This man holds a “free hugs” sign
and walked in the middle of the street. He was wearing a trouser and a coat. For a man, his hair is too long. He also has a
thick mustache and beard. It’s makes people didn't want to get closer to him. People
there only looked at him, sometimes they smile and took his picture. At first,
I think the man with the sign in his hand was so frustrated and little bit
hopeless. We can see it from the black and white screen at the beginning.
People were passing by, but this man never stop to try, whenever no one respect
to him.
When he was being careless, an
old woman approached him and asked about what he did. The man spontaneously kneeling
and offering a hug with his stretched out arms. The old woman immediately greeted
with a hug. The grandmother successfully attracts the attention of other people
to this man. And then, so many people want to cuddle with this man, even a guy with
a serious face did the same.
Because of this man, the street
became a little bit crowded. Because, everybody stopped for a while to see this
campaign. Then, the policeman came and banned this campaign directly. Because the
policeman thought that the campaign disturbed another pedestrian at that place.
The man explained it patiently to the policeman. He never gave up and continued
his campaign with different way. He offered a hug to everybody and asked that
participants to give their signature as the petition of this campaign. People became
more respect to this man and helped this man with their pleasure. Unbelievable,
he got 10,000 signatures from the participants.
At the end of the video, everybody
looked very happy. They embraced to each other, include the policeman. The policeman
can’t do anything, because this campaign already supported by 10,000 people and
it’s not such kind of criminalization.
I think, the main point of this
video is how we respect each other and love our environment. Although it looks
very simple, actually hugs have many benefits, both for health or relationship
between human beings. Just because a hug, people in the video became more
respect to each other. Caring is the first step of creating peace and
happiness. So, we have to reduce our individual attitude to produce more smiles
in this world.


I feel this is such a good paragraph about free hug as our topic here. I like the way you describe what the man did, also it is a good grammatical sentence, and it is already arranged as what our lecturer expect. Good job, I like it ! :)
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