When
I entered English Education Department, I met her on my first day. Her name is
Sang Ayu Kompyang Arisetyawati, but she is usually called Osin. The word “Sang”
in her name was so strange for me, but she explained that it was a family name.
I like to be her friend because she is really patient, good looking, but a
little bit quiet and shy. Osin is not like the ordinary girl.
She
is a really patient girl. She never angry with anyone who hurt her feelings. If
I were Osin, I will be very mad at that person. In addition, I asked her to
explain some lesson that I didn’t understand, she always explained it
patiently. Moreover she always accompanies me to do anything, like doing my
committee’s business. She never says that she tired or bored when she helped
me.
She
has a good looking and successfully attracts many boys attention. Osin has
white complexion. Her eyes are light brown. She has a curly hair. Her chubby
cheeks beautify her face. She always wears tidy clothes in the campus every
day. I realize that she has a good fashion style. No wonder that Osin always
looks beautiful.
Osin
is one of the quiet and shy person in my class. It is not easy to be her
friend. Osin will not speaks even a word, if you don’t ask her. She prefers to
wait rather than starts the conversation. She doesn’t like to be a member of a
student organization in the campus. It seems that Osin doesn’t like to meet a
new person. Many boys that have a crush on her should try so hard to get closer
to her. This is how I knew that she is a quiet and shy person.
Even
thought I have tried so hard to be her friend at the beginning, now we are a
good friend. When people knew Osin better, people will know that Osin is a nice
girl. She always stays calm when she has to face every single thing in her
life. People will stare at her for a while because of her appearance. Never
talk too much with a stranger is her habit. In short, Osin is a kind person
with many personal interests that can differentiate her from other girl.
| Osin and I was eating ice cream together |
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So nice writing Yanti. You described Osin in detail and good grammar. You've done a god job :)
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