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Banyuasri Market in The Evening

Topic Sentence                        : There are a lot of activities in Banyuasri, especially selling and buying activities.

Major supporting idea           : Banyuasri market is very crowded in the evening

Minor supporting idea           : - There are so many buyer, seller an also beggar.

 -  The seller’s stands put in lines.

-         The first line is flowers and offering sellers.

-         The second line is vegetable sellers

-         The third line is cake, cookies and meals sellers

-         The fourth line is meat and fish sellers

-         The fifth line is fruit sellers.

-         The sixth line is clothes and sandals, CD player, cassette sellers.

Major supporting idea           : There are a lot of activities in Banyuasri Market, so that the market becomes noise.

Minor supporting idea           : - if you pass the seller, you will hear the sellers offer their goods.

-         Some of the people there are doing bargain activities.

-         Music from the CD player and cassette sellers are also contribute so much noise.

-         And also the vehicle’s sound makes the market situation noisier.

Major supporting idea              : Because the sellers sell many kind of goods it makes the market has various kind of smells.

Minor supporting idea           : -     If you pass the flower and the offering seller, you will smell fragrances.

-         If you pass the meat and fish seller, you will smell a stingy and putrid.

-         Every smells will mix become ones.

Major supporting idea             : Bad impact of the irresponsible people in the market makes the surrounding market’s area is muddy.

Minor supporting idea           : It will make you feel a little bit uncomfortable.

Major supporting idea           : There are some activities that the buyers usually do before buying something in the Banyuasri Market.

Minor supporting idea           : - You can go around the market to choose the best and the cheap one.

-         You can do a bargain before deciding to buy it.

-         Doing bargain and get the cheapest price is the exciting activities in the market.

-         After you get a deal price with the seller, you can pay it depend on the deal price.

Concluding sentence              : In short, people can sell, buy and bargain things from the Banyuasri Market. Even though, the dirty and the stingy smells will make you uncomfortable, but doing shopping in this market is very exciting.