Banyuasri Market In The Evening
Major supporting idea : Banyuasri market is near Banyuasri
Bus Station.
Minor
supporting idea : Banyuasri
market located between the Bus Station and the morning market.
Topic
Sentence : There
are a lot of activities in Banyuasri, especially selling and buying activities.
Major
supporting idea : Banyuasri
market is very crowded in the evening
Minor
supporting idea : There are so
many buyer, seller an also beggar.
Major
supporting idea : Banyuasri
market is an organized market.
Minor
supporting idea : - the seller’s
stands put in lines.
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The first line is flowers and offering sellers.
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The second line is vegetable sellers
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The third line is cake, cookies and meals
sellers
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The fourth line is meat and fish sellers
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The fifth line is fruit sellers.
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The sixth line is clothes and sandals, CD player,
cassette sellers.
Major
supporting idea : When we are in
Banyuasri market, we will hear so much noise there.
Minor supporting idea : - if you pass the seller, you will
hear the sellers offer their goods.
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Some of the people there are doing bargain
activities.
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Music from the CD player and cassette sellers
are also contribute so much noise.
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And also the vehicle’s sound makes the market
situation noisier.
Major supporting idea : Besides the noisy situation, you
will smell some kind of things.
Minor
supporting idea :
- If you pass the flower and the offering
seller, you will smell any fragrances.
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If you pass the meat and fish seller, you will
smell a stingy and putrid.
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Every smells will mix become ones.
Major supporting idea : In other hand, some of the market’s
floors are muddy.
Minor supporting idea : It will make you feel a little bit
uncomfortable.
Major
supporting idea : There are a
lot of activities that you can do in the banyuasri market.
Minor
supporting idea : - before you
make a decision, you can go around the market to choose the best and the cheap
one.
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You can do a bargain before deciding to buy it.
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After you get a deal price with the seller, you
can pay it depend on the deal price.
Doing bargain and get the
cheapest price is the exciting activities in the market.
You have clear outline but you miss the topic sentence.
ReplyDeleteMake sure your concluding sentence represent the overall idea, therefore having a topic sentence help you to make it unity.
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