Monday, December 2, 2013

Outline

Banyuasri Market In The Evening

Major supporting idea           : Banyuasri market is near Banyuasri Bus Station.
Minor supporting idea           : Banyuasri market located between the Bus Station and the morning market.
Topic Sentence                        : There are a lot of activities in Banyuasri, especially selling and buying activities.
Major supporting idea           : Banyuasri market is very crowded in the evening
Minor supporting idea           : There are so many buyer, seller an also beggar.
Major supporting idea           : Banyuasri market is an organized market.
Minor supporting idea           : - the seller’s stands put in lines.
-         The first line is flowers and offering sellers.
-         The second line is vegetable sellers
-         The third line is cake, cookies and meals sellers
-         The fourth line is meat and fish sellers
-         The fifth line is fruit sellers.
-         The sixth line is clothes and sandals, CD player, cassette sellers.
Major supporting idea           : When we are in Banyuasri market, we will hear so much noise there.
Minor supporting idea           : - if you pass the seller, you will hear the sellers offer their goods.
-         Some of the people there are doing bargain activities.
-         Music from the CD player and cassette sellers are also contribute so much noise.
-         And also the vehicle’s sound makes the market situation noisier.
Major supporting idea           : Besides the noisy situation, you will smell some kind of things.
Minor supporting idea           :
-     If you pass the flower and the offering seller, you will smell any fragrances.
-         If you pass the meat and fish seller, you will smell a stingy and putrid.
-         Every smells will mix become ones.
Major supporting idea           : In other hand, some of the market’s floors are muddy.
Minor supporting idea           : It will make you feel a little bit uncomfortable.
Major supporting idea           : There are a lot of activities that you can do in the banyuasri market.
Minor supporting idea           : - before you make a decision, you can go around the market to choose the best and the cheap one.
-         You can do a bargain before deciding to buy it.
-         After you get a deal price with the seller, you can pay it depend on the deal price.
Doing bargain and get the cheapest price is the exciting activities in the market.

1 comment:

  1. You have clear outline but you miss the topic sentence.
    Make sure your concluding sentence represent the overall idea, therefore having a topic sentence help you to make it unity.
    Good luck

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